Summary + Thesis Draft + Supports #2

 Thesis Statement: The XYZ Reality augmented goggles will definitely bridge the gap between technology and the construction industry by integrating BIM 360, utilizing 3D overlays and improving the safety. This technology makes construction more accurate and encourages new ideas in the industry.


Support #1:One key feature of the Atom goggles is their seamless integration with Autodesk’s BIM 360, a cloud-based platform that helps construction teams stay connected and manage projects more efficiently.

Support #2:Another impressive feature of the XYZ Reality Atom goggles is their 3D overlay capability, which lets construction teams see and interact with 3D models right on-site.


Support #3:Additionally, the XYZ Reality Atom goggles really improve safety on construction sites by providing workers with real-time digital overlays of building models. The goggles display 3D models that align perfectly with what’s actually being built, helping workers spot potential hazards before they become problems (XYZ Reality,2023, March 23)

Counterargument: One downside of the XYZ Reality Atom goggles is their high cost, which could be a challenge for smaller construction companies or independent contractors.


Conclusion:



Carter (2023, February 2). Xyz reality atom review: a leading AR headset. nhttps://www.xrtoday.com/augmented-reality/xyz-reality-atom-review-a-leading-ar-headset/

XYZ Reality (2023, March 23). What is Engineering Grade Augmented Reality?

https://www.xyzreality.com/resources/what-is-engineering-grade-augmented-reality#

Autodesk (n.d). The best of BIM 360 is now part of Autodesk Construction Cloud https://www.autodesk.com/bim-360/




Comments

  1. Brad BlackstoneFebruary 7, 2025 at 9:11 PM

    In your thesis you have these controlling ideas: by integrating BIM 360, (missing verb) 3D overlays and improving the safety.

    They are not parallel. The second point needs a verb.

    These points then should appear on the sujpport sentences.

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  2. AravinFebruary 10, 2025 at 9:49 AM

    Apologies professor, I have made the necessary changes. Thank you for the feedback.

    ReplyDelete

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